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    It was a dark and dreary night. The city far from sight and nothing but the sound of crickets and the faint sound of the pap pap of rain hitting the beaten and broken place Luna called home. She lay on the damp floor wondering through her mind, which was as broken and flawed as her current living situation. But she can never go back to that place. Ever since that event she would never be welcomed back.


     She was slowly drifting into sleep, a rare occurrence for Luna especially after all that had happened in town, and yet the fatigue seemed to be stronger than the constant nightmare that was her thoughts. Her eyes were slowly getting heavier when a large thud come from the second floor. Impossible she thought, No animal would be stupid enough to climb those stairs and make it without me hearing. But soon she realized… this was no animal that caused the sound, but something far worse. This could be the death she had so vary narrowly avoided last time as she listened closely for the person to start walking again. She could hear it, the soft thuds she had so stupidly missed when she arrived at the house an hour ago from her pathetic excuse of a hunting trip. The man upstairs was slowly moving towards the broken stairs ba dum ba dum ba dum slowly they got louder, and louder,  ba Dum ba DUm Ba DUm. Luna grabbed the thick piece of floorboard, probably broken by a large wild animal as it searched for an animal that had gotten away. BA DUM BA DUM, The man had reached the stairs and had looked down upon her and her pitiful excuse for a weapon. He had a crazed look in his eyes as she called out “Thomas?” She asked, “what are you doing here?”


   “You know what I want Luna.” His arm shook as the moonlight glinted off of the piece of metal in his hand. “If I can’t have her back,” His lips turning to a crazed smile.”Then I'm taking you.” His hand tightened over the now visible gun clutched in his palm as he slowly started to lift it.


     “Wait! Thomas think about what you're doing. There's already been so much bloodshed why add this?” Luna's voice wavered as she spoke, slowly worsening her situation. “We both want our Veronica back thomas but there is nothing we can do now you've already done enough.”


   “Dont you dare blame me for my own wifes death when i was pointing the gun at you. Say her name one more time and you're not making it to your own lover's funeral.’’He spat at me. As the situation became more and more diere, Luna knew there was no running from this man. He was insane and there was no going back to before, back with her veronica as sleepless nights became less frequent and fear of being caught was more justified than either of them thought. Sure they never did anything but keep eachother warm and keep the fright away but from the outside world, this was something different. The morning that luna woke up to thomas coming home from a trip she will never forget...it was the one time neither of them remembered to set an alarm. So what they woke up to was worse than insomnia and it was far worse then any sleep deprived nightmare. The loud bang was what woke up Luna, but the blood ws what really pulled her out of that strange feeling of never wanting to get out of bed. There was so much blood. Luna never screamed louder then that morning as she fell out of bed and realized what covered her clothes as it grotesquely stuck to her skin. It was something she could never scrub her skin hard enough to get rid of the memory. She just wishes Thomas wasn't such a horrible shot.
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So hello everyone I'm sorry I haven't posted much my computer is the family computer so its really slow and I shuts my art program a lot so a lot of my recent works where lost while I was drawing them but soon I will have something out.
Wow everyone! 12 watchers? I don't even have that many friends in real life... is it sad that this is an achievement in my mind?

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Irbisty Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for watching me! I appreciate it a lot Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Huggy Hug) [V2]
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lunabelle2001 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
No problem you're a very talented artist!
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Irbisty Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you Bear Emoji-08 (Rolling Love) [V1] 
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Phototubby Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconthankssignplz:Hug
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MyEternalEscape Featured By Owner Edited Aug 8, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the Favs! ^^
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lunabelle2001 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
you deserve it, any one with that much talent should be recognized for it
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ChiccaNeko Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Hi and welocome on dA!Llama Emoji-03 (Sparkles) [V1] 
Hope you'll have a nice time here! For any question feel free to ask :) (Smile)
If you want take a look at my art too! Llama Emoji-39 (Eager) [V2] 
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lunabelle2001 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
thanks for being so welcoming!
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